I want to embrace death,
As I have no fears to live.
No one so close, to lose
Neither do I desire to live.
The pain given by close-ones,
Stabs and kills me every time.
It’s easy to compromise with death,
Then to stay and give explanation every time.
I’m fed up with double faces,
Hidden motives and selfishness.
People like me find world,
A difficult place to adjust.
Away, I want to go away,
In search of heaven.
Where speech is golden,
And is free from all odds and even.
Come death and take me;
I want to dis-own my life.
Come hither and take me
I do not want this life.
Amazing!!! "I want to dis-own my life" I loved this line!!! Nikita, you are improving day by day, trust me... Your poems remind me of Emily Dickinson every time I read them. And I have told you that. :-)
ReplyDeleteDeath is presented here not as a concept that terrifies human beings but as a relief to all the problems that life brings to you. Though, I personally don't agree to this, I loved the way you have presented your powerful thoughts in a simple language. Thumbs up!
Marisha.
Just one line "Its easy to die. What's difficult is to live and face your problems." Though i dont agree with it, the poem as a work of art is brilliant! Tugs at the very strings of heart!
ReplyDeleteyaar everytime i read ur poem it always matches with my thots..and i agree with marisha..even i loved d line "i want to dis own my life"...and even m fed up wid my life...
ReplyDeleteEven i think d same..bt difference is dat cnt express in words like u do...simply loved it..:)
U treat a depressing theme "death" very beautifully and the words are so strong to make the reader feel about it. Gud goin!! gulabjamuni
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Thanxx Hero and rupita...!! :)
ReplyDeletetoo good
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